雅思summary范文(合集8篇)

雅思summary范文 第1篇

雅思大作文模版：利弊关系型

It is undeniable that the specific issue of sth./ 或接whether 从句 has become controversial. However, in spite of those who believe that sth. have more negative/positive effects, I hold opposite attitude.

The drawbacks of sth are obvious. Some people are really concerned about … They hold that …(请解释)。 Other feel upset at …(另外一个弊端), which will damage …/endager ….

It is often the case that …(此处总结上段提出的两个弊端)。But when it comes to …, …, and …,(此处先总结写你认同的几个好处)，an increasing number of people including me are convinced that …...For one thing, …。 The evidence recently presented in research journals available to the public confirms that … 写调查结果，通过数字来证明自己所列举的好处1. Besides， 。。。(另外一个好处). In other words, …(换种说法解释)。This is another aspect of how sth benefits us.

All in all, sth has played a significant role in … It has both upsides and downsides. But it is my firm belief that its disadvantages/advantages of … outweigh the advantages/disadvantages.

雅思写作高分模板：利弊分析型作文

1、AAA has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our daily life. The benefits AAA brings to us are far more than its disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its problem.

2、On the positive side, AAA has enabled us to (1) 此处填入 AAA 的优势之一。For instance, ( 2 )举例说明优势之一。Besides, (3)AAA 的优势之二。Nowadays, (4) 举例说明优势之二。In addition, ( 5 ) AAA 的优势之三。

3、On the negative side, (6) 此处填入 AAA 的劣势之一。For example,(7) 举例说明劣势之一。Besides,(8)AAA 的劣势之二。Furthermore,(9)AAA 的劣势之三。

4、All in all, we can not live without AAA for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.

雅思大作文写作方法：客观利弊法

如电子书籍是否能取代传统书籍，就可从电子书籍客观利弊来分析是否可取代

考题：TV，internet and radio are very popular nowadays. Some people say that they will replace books and written words as the main source of information. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Argue for

优势：

1. the fastest and most effective way of obtaining information

can get information on TV and in the Internet instead of buying newspapers and going to libraries, which saves time and money.

3. informative/ have super capacities to save information. On the contrary, the capacities of books are limited

ARGUE against

劣势：

1. people can not use the electronic media without equipment such as computers and TV sets; however, books are portable.

2. books and written words having more than 3000 years history are more mature than electronic media

3. no good for protecting the copyrights.

4, People often criticize TV for showing too much sex and violence

雅思写作中表达利弊观点的100个通用模板

60条通用优点

1. offer a sense of job satisfaction andsecurity 带来工作的满意感和安全感

2. lay a solid professional working experience 积累扎实的工作经验

3. reduce/cut down expenditure 削减支出

4. increase/generate job opportunities 创造就业机会

5. meet/satisfy personalized needs 满足人性化的需求

6. promote talent introduction and exchange 促进人才的引进与交流

7. keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落伍

8. better/promote/enhance/further human resource development 完善人力资源的发展

9. lay a solid foundation for 奠定坚实的基础

10. pave the way for the future/development 为未来铺平了道路

11. foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养合作感与竞争感

12. cultivate the spirit of team working 培养团队合作精神

13. master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧

14. widen one’s knowledge 拓宽知识面

15. enrich one’s social and life experience 丰富社会与人生经历

16. enlarge one’s view/broaden one’s horizon 拓宽视野

17. realize the value of life 实现人生价值

18. surmount/overcome/win over /master difficulties 克服困难

19. grasp good communication skills 掌握人际交流技巧

20. remove misunderstanding and discrimination 消除误解与歧视

21. keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的平衡

22. raise the standard of living提高生活水平

23. penetrate every corner of our life and be impressive 贯穿生活的每一个角落而且是印象深刻的

24. improve cultural integration and globalization促进文化的整合与全球化

25. enrich people’s spiritual life 丰富人们的精神生活

26. promote social skills and competence 提高社交技巧与能力

27. strengthen the family ties促进家庭团结

28. cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感

29. bring joys and comforts to sb带来愉悦与舒适

30. usher in a brand-new life-style引入全新的生活方式

31. relieve the pressure of 缓解压力

32. maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳定

33. improve the utilization rate of energy resources提高能源的利用率

34. make full use of充分利用

35. satisfy people’s needs/meet the demands of people 满足人们的需求

36. promote the development of relative industries促进相关产业的发展

37. stimulate domestic needs刺激国内需求

38. impel economic development促进经济的发展

39. generate jobs, income and tax revenues扩大就业机会，提高收入

40. enhance mutual understanding促进相互的理解

41. boost local development促进当地的发展

42. promote cultural exchange and cooperation促进文化的交流与合作

43. enrich one’s experience of life 丰富人生经历

44. strengthen the ties with outside world加强与外面世界的联系

45. realize the sustainable development ofresources实现能源的可持续发展

46. foster a climate of peace and prosperity营造和平繁荣的气氛

47. stimulate our feelings of togetherness 激发团结

48. maintain a natural balance 保持自然平衡

49. reduce the labor intensity 降低劳动强度

50. stimulate one’s imagination and interest in sth 刺激人们的想象里与兴趣

51. accelerate the flow of information 加速信息的流动

52. provide more business opportunities 提供商机

53. increase the productivity 提高生产力

54. create more opportunities for education 创造受教育的机会

55. improve educational conditions 改善教育条件

56. release people from hard manual work 使人们从繁重的体力劳动中解脱出来

57. speed up technical innovation 加速技术革新

58. better the development of human society 完善人力资源的发展

59. promote the social inclusion 提高社会的包容度

60. bring immeasurable economic benefits 带来巨大的经济效益

40条通用弊端

1. put sb or sth at risk 使……冒风险

2. be a serious setback for the career development对职业发展是一个严重的挫折

3. be lack of a sense of job security 缺乏工作的安全感

4. distract sb from doing sth 是某人从某事中分心

5. impose a heave strain on 带来巨大的压力

6. be exaggerated and cheating 夸大且欺骗的

7. be the invasion of privacy 侵犯隐私

8. violate rights of free speech侵犯言论自由的权利

9. endanger social stability and safety 危害到社会的稳定与安全

10. restrain sb from doing 限制某人做某事

11. arouse resistances in the public 引发公众的对立

12. be very orthodox in one’s behavior 行为正统

13. be incompatible with the present work与当前的工作不融合

14. go astray 误入歧途

15. undermine local culture 破环当地文化

16. jeopardize the safety and stability of the society 破坏社会的安全与稳定

17. set a bad example to 树立坏的榜样

18. lead to the extinction of some species 导致一些物种的灭绝

19. result in shortage of energy and natural resources导致能源的短缺

20. be irreparable and irreversible damage 不可修复性的破环

21. to cause the estrangement/isolation/alienation between A and B 导致了 A与B之间的疏远

22. bring disgrace on sb 为……带来耻辱

23. suffer heavy losses 损失惨重

24. easily cause stress-related illnesses 容易导致与压力相关的疾病

25. lack basic infrastructures 缺乏基础设施

26. break the ecological balance 破环生态平衡

27. lead to extravagant waste of public funds 导致公共资金的极度浪费

28. make… in disorder 使混乱

29. be detached from 脱离……

30. be harmful to our physical and mental and health 损害身心健康

31. lead to degradation of social atmosphere 世风日下

32. further widen the gaps between the rich andthe poor 进一步加大贫富之间的差距

33. be the drying up of our limited natural resources and the deterioration of the environment 有限的自然资源的枯竭和环境的恶化

34. contaminate environment 污染环境

35. generate electromagnetic radiation and jeopardize human health 产生电磁污染而且危害人类健康

36. bring about the risks such as computer virus,nuclear leakage, biological weapons, global warming, exhaustion of natural resources and extinction of many plant and animal species 带来很多风险，比如电脑病毒，核泄露，生化武器，全球变暖，自然资源的枯竭以及很多动植物物种的灭绝

37. be a root of all evils 万恶之源

38. be easily taken in by 容易被欺骗

39. aggravate the traffic jams and worsen the crowdedness 使交通堵塞和拥挤更为恶化

40. will pay a high price for this negative development of 为……的负面发展付出高昂的代价。

雅思summary范文 第2篇

题目：

You wish to immigrate to a country but are not sure about the requirements and . Write a letter to the immigration officer of this country to ask about, say who you are and explain your qualificationsand experience.

范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to receive information regarding the immigration proceduresto Canada.

亲爱的先生、女士：

I am 34 years old and am currently working as senior mechanical engineer at ABC Tech Company in Shanghai. I hold a Bachelors and a Masters degree from Shanghai Tongji University. I am married and my wife will be having our first child this coming autumn.

我今年34岁，目前是上海ABC技术公司的.高级机械工程师，获上海同济大学学士学位和硕士学位，已婚，太太将于秋季生育我们的第一个孩子。

I have been considering immigrating to Canada for quiet some time and would like to know if my qualifications and work experience make me eligible to apply. I have enclosed my resume as well as a bank statement of my current financial status and my English proficiencylevel.

我考虑移民加拿大已经有相当一段时间了，很想了解一下以我的资历和工作经验是否具备申请资格。我随信附上了我的个人简历以及表明我本人经济状况的银行证明和我的英语水平等级证书。

雅思summary范文 第3篇

An ongoing topic of debate in traffic safety world has been whether the age for driving should be raised or not. Typically, the legal age to drive alone needs to be 17 or so, but there is a proposal, underpinned by some groups.

It is fairly hard to imagine that home has become the only place of safety in modern society, where residents are worried about various kinds of crimes, street robbery, car theft and even shooting. This is obligation of the government to protect the civil life and work, which, I think, could be classified into three aspects.

First, deterring potential crimes is considered as a direct way to improve living environment for residents. Some strict laws and regulations should be imposed on specific crime cases. For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment could be an effective way to deter crimes, like theft and robbery. Also, lowering the minimum crime age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crimes because younger criminals are liable to escape from punishments.

Second, the high rate of crimes is derived partly from the widening gap of living in cities. Therefore, creating more job opportunities after investing in manufactures and public services could, to some degree, bring about stable incomes. Reduction in the number of the homeless and unemployed contributes to decline in the level of social chaos and conflicts. When everyone is satisfied with the company they work for and the salary they are paid, there may be no need for them to risk committing crimes.

Third, popularity of primary and secondary education or opening more technical schools is an urgent task. People who live in slums with minimum education more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and comparatively higher social status. Therefore, the level of education reflects living condition and public security in communities, which for a long term is regarded as the foundation of civilized society.

In conclusion, there are plenty of solutions to crimes and social problems, which depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and individuals.

相关词汇

Street robbery街道抢劫

Car theft 偷车

Obligation责任

Classify分类

Deter震慑

Be imposed on强加于

Prolong延长

Imprisonment关_

Be liable to 易于做某事

Be derived from 由 而产生

Social chaos社会混乱

Conflict冲突

Slum贫民窟

Decent体面的

Comparatively相对而言地

雅思写作do you agree or disagree范文解读：社会责任犯罪题材

“是否同意”类文章是雅思写作大作文常见题型，平时注意积累词汇，短语对写作帮助非常大，以207月25日大作文真题为例，讲解如何写“社会责任”题材文章，希望对大家有帮助!

Task：

同题型文章回顾：年1月31日真题

示范写作大纲：

引导段：说明企业越来越多的社会现象，表明企业除了赚取利润还应承担社会责任的观点

主体段一：说明企业需要承担社会责任的第一个理由：很多家庭无法支付教育费用，无法获得教育就业的机会。

主体段二：说明企业需要承担社会责任的第二个理由：为社会贡献可以带来更多的企业利润。

主体段三：说明企业需要承担社会责任的弊端：影响企业运作和发展，严重可能会导致企业破产。

总结段：总结自己的观点。

示范写作：

语料：

vocabulary：bankruptcy welfare enterprise charity generation law-abiding citizen

Work/Life Balance

It is important to achieve a balance between work time and leisure or family time

Too much work can result in stress and poor health

“workaholics” may neglect their families and friends

People need to take regular holidays

Companies should be expect employees to work overtime

Nowadays, many people work part-time or have flexible working hours

Technology allow people to work from home

Many companies provide childcare facilities

A good work/ life balance can raise job satisfaction

Happy, healthy workers are more productive

雅思作文高分范文-青少年重罪犯是否应该判成年人的刑

雅思写作题目：Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思写作高分范文：关于年轻罪犯刑罚的话题及其解题思路

雅思写作范文：

Crimes can be detestable, while minor offenders and their crimes are from time to time treated with leniency. Thus, some argue that laws should not discriminate, and equally punish minor criminals—an opinion that this essay is against.

犯罪可以是可憎的，而未成年犯及其犯罪则往往是宽大处理。因此，有人认为法律不应该歧视和平等惩罚未成年罪犯这篇文章反对的观点。

To begin with, minors are yet to approach their maturity, and their crimes, albeit serious, should be punished with the consideration of their young age. Internationally speaking, countries might define the start of adulthood differently—18 being the most common—but they commonly believe that there is adistinction between minor crimes and adult crimes. Minors are likely to be given a better chance for rehabilitation when they commit crimes because of their inexperience of life and possibly better life prospects. In that case, milder punishments are inflicted on juvenile delinquents: lesser sentencing and relatively less harsh correction facilities are introduced in their cases.

首先，未成年人尚未成熟，他们的罪行，虽然严重，应该考虑到他们的年轻。从国际上讲，各国对成年期开始的定义可能有所不同，18是最常见的，但它们通常认为轻微犯罪和成年犯罪之间有区别。未成年人在犯罪时，由于缺乏生活经验，可能还有更好的生活前景，他们可能得到更好的康复机会。在那种情况下，对青少年罪犯的惩罚比较轻：在他们的案件中引入较少的量刑和相对较不严厉的矫正设施。

Moreover, considering the correction process, minor offenders should not be punished equally as adult criminals. Despite the above-mentioned arguments that are in young offenders’ defense, crimes, especially felonies by minors, deserve heavy punishment to deter crimes and reduce the harm of those crimes to the society. However, sending minors to adult prison might entail unexpectedly negative results. First, minors are naturally closer to more sophisticated criminals and crimes, which aggravate juvenile delinquency. Second, when in adult correctional facilities, young criminals might be threatened by assaults by adult prisoners, mostly sexually, which is nowhere closer to the purpose of rehabilitation.

此外，考虑到矫正程序，未成年犯不应受到成年罪犯的同等惩罚。尽管有上述论点在青少年犯罪者的辩护中，但犯罪，特别是未成年人的重罪，应该受到严厉的惩罚，以阻止犯罪，减少这些犯罪对社会的伤害。然而，将未成年人送入成人_可能会带来意想不到的负面结果。首先，未成年人更接近更复杂的犯罪和犯罪，这加重了青少年犯罪。第二，在成人教养机构中，年轻罪犯可能受到成年犯人的攻击，主要是性侵犯，这与康复目的相去甚远。

In sum, law breakers, be they minors or not, should be punished for their wrongdoings, but lesser sentences and special correctional facilities might be more reasonable and helpful.

总之，无论违法者是否是未成年人，都应该因他们的过错受到惩罚，但是更轻的刑罚和特殊的惩戒设施可能更合理，更有帮助。

雅思犯罪类作文思路解析

首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些，主要有分析犯罪的原因，青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。话题题目如下：

The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?

In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?

下面我们就一一分析一下。

首先：关于犯罪的成因。

无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应该想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题，也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。

由经济层面进入教育层面，大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低，他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会，或者失业导致流落街头，这类人群冲动易怒，易发生冲突。

心理健康问题，这是比较容易忽略的问题。校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题，甚至场景是校园暴力，家庭暴力的受害者。

雅思summary范文 第4篇

Today consumers are facing an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

雅思写作题目讲解：

【题目关键词】

advertisements; exert an influence upon; adopt measures

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。

【写作语汇一览表】

response to an advertisement回应广告

商业广告

传递信息

and catchy phrases花言巧语

is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。

immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响

不易察觉

great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品

【写作例句推荐】

1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.

advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products, to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.

雅思写作范文：

The extent to which people are influenced by advertisements can be measured in terms of the high sales of popular consumer goods, many of them being unnecessary or completely useless. Mainly through the media, advertisements on products and services are able to penetrate the public mind with half truth and half lying. In many cases, consumers are becoming so greedy that they are not only buying things they really do not need but also spending the money they do not have.

人们受广告影响的程度可以用流行消费品的高销量来衡量，其中许多是不必要的或完全无用的。主要是通过媒体，产品和服务上的广告能以半真半假的方式渗透到公众的思想中。在许多情况下，消费者变得如此贪婪，以至于他们不仅购买了他们真正不需要的东西，而且还花了他们没有的钱。

Although advertising gives people a chance as consumers, actually most advertisements tend to cause them to desire for something worthless. Under such circumstances, it is easy to change people's need into greed. So much so, they are constantly encouraged to want things--want this and want that. This human behavior is haunted by the media from all fronts: on radio, on television, and online, not to mention printed circulations such as newspapers and magazines. Obviously, a great number of “impulsive” buyers are persuaded under the illusion that new products or services could make a difference in their lives. Despite all the benefits of the free market economy, the effects of unreliable advertising are particularly negative in that the power of advertising does not reflect the real needs of the society in which products and services are sold.

雅思summary范文 第5篇

Task： If the product is of good quality and meets people’s needs, people will buy it. Therefore, advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

如果产品质量好，满足人们的需求，人们就会去买。因此，广告是没必要的，仅仅是一种娱乐。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?

思路解析：

2. 销售功能：广告帮助人们有效地了解和对比产品。举例，通过广告中对于相关产品的参数，功能，和总体性能的描述，客户能了解到该产品的特点和价值，并对于产品的好坏做出判断。

3. 刺激销售：广告能勾起观众的购买欲。举例，一个精美的广告往往能让用户重复购买他们不需要的东西，如奢侈品广告。

参考范文：

What is the root function of an advertisement in media? Some people believe it is just for entertaining viewers and it has nothing to do with products selling. Personally, I hold an opposed view that advertising is still the main way of stimulating the consumption of common goods, and my reasons will be explored as below.

Admittedly, Advertisements today have less influence on the public to purchase commodities, because now there are diverse information accesses to understand a product. For example, on an age of Internet, people with desires of purchasing goods, especially the youngsters, prefer reading the professional articles of forums or assessment websites collecting comments and feedbacks from consumers, or listening to the advices from the face-to-face communication with friends and peers. In their eyes, the description of a certain product on an advertisement is unpractical, unobjective and unconvincing. Therefore, advertisements—such as posters in billboards and Videos in TV screens—are viewed as the amusement by which the audience’s stress and worries in minds can be relieved.

However, I strongly believe this assertion underestimate advertisement functions in day-to-day life. Firstly, by what way can a customer be sure of whether a product is really good or needed? The answer is definitely the advertisement. For example, today cell phones of different bands have a high similarity in their appearances and shapes, and it is a big challenge for customers to pick put the right one. So there is a necessity for adverting, which can clearly presents the inner components, parameters and unique features of a cell phone. By reading the detailed information, customers can easily distinguish one product from others, and make a proper judgment of which one is the best or most satisfying for them.

The second reason against this assertion is that advertisements can encourage viewers to buy items they do not need. For example, typical slogans on advertisements like “special discount”, “limited time offer” and “buy one get one free”, are overwhelming temptations. They manipulate brains of customers, driving them to purchase these bargains, with no concern of whether the products are really essential or not.

All in all, this assertion is basically problematic. Although the influence of advertisements is declining, they are still irreplaceable, in terms of their great contributions on instructing people to compare and select high-quality products, as well as sparking the desire of customers to do more shopping.

雅思summary范文 第6篇

相似题目：Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by what extent do you agree or disagree?(犯罪.)

In some countries,a high proportion of criminal acts as committed by has this happened?What can be done to deal with this?(犯罪)

Many people do not feel safe at home or they are are the causes and what can be done to make people feel safe?(犯罪)

People are afraid to leave their homes for fear of crimes. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes while others think that little could be done. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.(犯罪)

高分范文题目：Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes of the phenomenon? How should they be punished?

写作提纲：

Reasons：

1 economic pressure, parents busy with work

2 small family

3 pressure from parents and from school as well

How to punish them：

1 deprive of freedom

2 work for local community

范文：

Youth crime contributes significantly to the increasing crime rate in the modern society. There is no doubt that these young delinquents take their punishment, but I prefer in different ways.

The reasons for this phenomenon are worth of scrutiny. In China with the economy booming, pressure from competition at work and business force parents to work hard, leaving insufficient time to their children. Without enough love from the family, these adolescents tend to do something astounding, sometimes slip beyond control. In addition, the one child policy in my country also contributes to higher crime rate because these little “emperors” are brought up in such a way that some of them are self-centered and tolerant of little. When confronted with difficulties or injustice, they are prone to resort to violence. Although spoiled, they have to live up to the high expectation of their parents in the name of love. Under such pressure from the family and school as well, they tend to be rebellious to their parents and teachers, in some cases the society as a whole.

When teenagers commit crimes, surely penalty should be given, especially the youth who commit serious crimes such as homicide or rape. No one should be excluded from justice, and justice has to be served. Depriving criminals of their freedom by imprisoning them, no matter how old they are, is the most effective measure to prevent crime and protect the lawful civilians in the society. Violent teenagers are as dangerous as their mature counterparts, hence should be put behind bars until they are no longer a threat to the public security.

On the other hand, most teenager crimes are minor, like vandalism, fighting or theft which does not do serious harm to victims. The immature behave in an illegal but less violent manner mostly for fun, or to show their courage to impress their peers or to attract their busy parents’ eyes. In these cases, they should be given some opportunities to be corrected and eventually come back to the right track rather than being judged as adults who commit crime deliberately with full awareness of the consequences of their conduct. Instead of being jailed, young lawbreakers can be forced to repair the damage to their neighborhood or local community, and offer their sincere apology to the victims or do some community duties such as serving the elderly in local nursing home.

To sum up, I personally reckon that political policy and the utilitarianism of educators should be responsible for today’s increasing juvenile delinquency. I agree with harsh treatment under the circumstances of serious crime. But if the offence is not major, adolescent criminals should be given alternative punishments like community service in order to reform them to be lawful citizens rather than being jailed.

雅思写作范文：恐惧犯罪

Task:Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crimes. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample answer：

With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.

Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislation can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the mature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing more education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails information about laws and legislation are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.

To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering educations are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

(296 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪

Task：Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

It is sometimes argued that young lawbreakers should be tried as adults for crimes. I personally believe that this is partly reasonable.

On the one hand, those who participate in violent crimes should not be treated differently than adult offenders. This is because most crimes, such as rape or murder, are thoughtful, deliberate and cunning in its planning and execution. If our courts trend toward a more lenientposition, then the related laws and punishment will not have a deterring effect on teenagers. As a result, teenagers are likely to commit horrible crimes since they are aware that they have legal protection. What’s worse, these teens might recommit after they are released from jails. In some cases, the lighter sentencing might also lead to resentment towards the judicial system as victims might argue that these young offenders do not confess what they have done. This could also result in insecurity in our society eventually.

On the other hand, the circumstances of a crime and its motivation should be taken into consideration when it comes to juvenile delinquency. For example, because of distress and hunger, some teens may turn to stealing food or robbery during a period of famine. Under this circumstance, harsh punishment, such as long-term jail might not be the best solution. In my view, most of the young offenders lack parenting and self-discipline, which would mean that other alternatives, such as community service and rehabilitation might be better alternatives for them.

In conclusion, I feel that it is vitally important for judges and state legislators to ensure the justice equality regardless of the criminal’s age.

(268 words)

雅思写作范文：罪犯的教育意义

Task：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family members. This is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good citizens.

(276 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪率提升

Task：In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Sample answer：

In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and this has caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.

The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with their children more frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.

Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.

In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.

(267 words)

雅思写作范文：青少年罪犯是否该判刑

Task：Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

1. 应该，严肃的法律能起到一种威慑作用，让青少年们不敢再次犯罪。举例，今天我们对于青少年罪犯的法律惩罚实在是不痛不痒，甚至是太仁慈了，这让年轻人藐视法律，他们会想，即使犯罪也没什么大不。所以像成年人那样惩罚他们很必要，比如说关_，而不是简单地口头教导。这些痛苦的惩罚让年轻人不敢随便挑战社会法规。

2. 然而，年轻人的司法体系应该更加灵活一些，这是因为年轻人很年轻，不成熟，他们的犯罪动机很可能不是那么邪恶。举例，成年罪犯的抢劫动机很明确，就是通过袭击他人来获取财富。相比之下，青少年伤害他人的行为很可能只是因为来自同伴的压力，或是因为一时冲动。考虑到他们并不是有意要犯罪，所以给他们较轻的判罚是可以理解的。

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Should young criminals be punished on the same level of adults, as some people argue? Personally, I agree with is assertion partially, while it underestimates the importance of a flexible judgment on youngsters.

The main reason of using the same standard to punish the youth is, it deters them from further crimes. Today, the main cause of juvenile crimes increasing is a lenient juvenile judicial system and milder punishments like lighter sentences, shortened prison terms, or even probation. Youngsters think they can always get off easily, regardless the seriousness of crimes. Therefore, it is necessary for juvenile offenders to be tried as strictly as adults, which lets these youngsters know that they are not exempt from heavy penalties, and not given any special consideration because of their age factor. By this way, their desires of making illegal activities would be inhibited.

However, to a large extent, juvenile judicial system should be flexible. Psychologically speaking, youngsters under the age of 18 are immature, with less social experience and concepts about social rules, or with no recognition about the consequence. In many cases, young criminals have no idea that what they do is illegal. For example, compared with adult criminals who have the definite plans and goals to make money by hunting or killing victims, the testimony of many teenage thieves and robbers proves that their movements are purposeless, and the main reasons for them to do so are no more than peer pressure and impulsiveness. Therefore, when it comes to the fact that adult criminals are intentional but young ones are unintentional, it is reasonable to treat and trial them differently.

In conclusion, a flexible juvenile judicial system should be encouraged. Although a strict punishment to young offenders as adults might be a profound education for young generations, sentences on young offenders should be lighter, considering the fact that their intentions of breaking law are fundamentally different from that of adults.

(320 words)

雅思summary范文 第7篇

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe commodities that are popular among consumers reflect the power of advertisement rather than the real needs of people. Do you agree or disagree?

You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Whether we like it or not, advertisement has been pouring into our daily life. They are so powerful that some people believe that it is not the needs of people but the power advertisement that makes commodities popular. Personally I don’t agree with this opinion.

First, let’s make clear what the real needs of people are. Real needs can be divided into two categories: the material satisfaction and spiritual satisfaction. People tend to regard material satisfaction as real needs and spiritual satisfaction as waste of money and time. This is not true. Some commodities may not be useful but they can give the owner a kind of satisfaction.

Second, let’s make clear the reason why advertisement is powerful. The key principle of advertisers is to grasp the needs of consumers, then pass the potential consumers the information that their commodities can meet your need. Advertisers can promote the needs of people, exploit the needs or even produce the needs of people. But whatever they do, it will be based on the needs of people.

But there are some advertisements that exaggerate the functions of the commodities to tell the wrong information to consumers. They make the commodities popular by cheating the majority of consumers. And also there are some commodities that do harm to the health of consumers and to the society. For example, smoking is poisonous, but the advertisements try to make a heroic image of the smokers, as the result smoking is popular among young men who are dreaming to become heroes in women’s eyes. But such advertisements are minorities.

In summary, advertisements bring us convenience to choose the commodities that can meet our needs. Most of the commodities are popular due to their usefulness, only some of them are due to the influence of advertisement.(298 words)

雅思summary范文 第8篇

In this article, the author explains the history of some of the earliest record Olympic Games held in Greece. It is generally accepted that these Games started around 1276 BC although the first champion was recorded in 776 BC. In the first Games there was only one event, however as time went on, different events were added. Longer distance running races were first added and then other events like wresting and the pentathlon. They even added events specially for boys and armed soldiers. Originally the Games were played on one day but this changed to five days. Another aspect of the Games was that women were not allowed as competitors or spectators. The competitors were also restricted to Greeks who were not professionals. However, a trend started where athletes became full-time specialists which ahs caused a lot of controversy.

The original:

A third kind of thinking is stimulated when anyone questions our beliefs and opinions. We sometimes find ourselves changing our minds without any resistance or heavy emotion, but if we are told that we are wrong we resent the imputation and harden our hearts. We are incredibly heedless in the formation of our beliefs, but find ourselves filled with an illicit passion for them when anyone proposes to rob us of their companionship. It is obviously not the idea themselves that are dear to us, but our self-esteem, which is threatened. We may surrender, but rarely confess ourselves vanquished. In the intellectual world at least, peace is without victory.

Few of us take the pains to study the origin of our cherished convictions; indeed, we have a natural repugnance to so doing. We like to continue to believe what we have been accustomed to accept as true, and the resentment aroused when doubt is cast upon any of our assumptions leads us seek every manner of excuse for clinging to them. The result is that most of our so-called reasoning consists in finding arguments for going on believing as we already do.

Summary:

A third kind of thinking occurs when we are told that our beliefs and opinions are wrong. We may have been heedless in their formation, but our self-esteem will not permit us to change. We may have to give up, but we are not convinced. We do not study the origin of our beliefs; we believe as we have been accustomed to believe, and we seek arguments for continuing to believe as we already do.

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